Saturday, July 6, 2013

Twisted (Part 9)


Anna tried calling Trish, but her phone was always unreachable, she even tried going on Trish’s house but the maid told her that Trish wasn’t there. Such instances gave Anna a confirmation that Trish is mad at her. Anna locked herself in her room and cry all day, until she received a text message from Christian, asking her to go to their hide out which she did immediately.
Anna saw Christian lying on the bed, he seems exhausted and drunk.
“Ichan? What’s wrong? Why are drunk”
“It was a perfect moment Annie, I thought it was it, the right time, so I took the risk, hahaha and this is what I got”
“That asshole punched you? Fuck him! Wait let me get a first aid kit first and we’ll avenge you”
But before Anna get a chance to stand Christian grab her hand, pulled and hugged her.
“Please don’t leave me, just stay for while, even just for a while”
Few minutes passed and Anna felt kinda awkward on that situation.
“Are you as lesbian now?” Anna told Christian just to break that awkward moment.
“Silly! I’m still as gorgeous as you darling”
Christian let go of Anna and they both laugh sarcastically.


“Ooh Annie let’s drink!”
“But you’re drunk Ichan maybe you should go home”
“No, Im not drunk! Come on Annie, I know you’re good at this!’
“Well, if you insist”
“A toast, for the broken hearted gays!”
“ hell yeah!”
They just enjoyed the night, drinking and laughing. They were both drunk and they were doing crazy things. Anna drew a mustache one her face while Christian used a blanket as dress. They turned on the music and dance, just like how prom dances are, but Christian does the female part and Anna for the male. They were just dancing as if they were in a party until Anna stepped on Christian’s blanket dress, which caused them to fall on the bed. Anna was on Christian’s top. At first they were laughing but as they stare on each other’s eyes, a certain intense feeling started to rule over their body. A few moments sooner Anna kissed Christian.

“Ichan!, hey buddy get up!”
“Anna? What happened?”
“What do you mean what happened, were late for school, that happened”
“I mean, last night”
“Last night? Hahaha, well, you fell a sleep, you said you were tough but then you ended up sleeping like a baby, haha you’re even moaning as of you’re having a some sort of wet dream hahaha”
A minute later both of there phones received a message. Anna’s from Trish and Christian’s was from Troy. Both messages saying that Trish and Troy was willing give a shot on them, accepting their confessions and asking to meet them.
“So what now?” Anna asked Christian
“Well it’s a mission accomplished I guess”
“So that means you’re going?”
“Yeah, I think so, I wanna know what he has to say, Why you?”
“Same goes here”
They went home first to prepare themselves . They met again at the bus station which grants them a chance to say goodbye as they were going on different direction
“Best of luck Ichan”
“You too Annie”
“Thanks a lot for everything; I’m really happy that we had the chance to be this close again”
“Yeah I am as well as happy”

They rode their buses but then, they were having a strange feeling, as if every step was to heavy to do, that something is pulling them back on that house or more likely back with each other.


PS
Yeah I know, the story us getting boring and fast phased haha anyway don't worry the nest issue would be the conclusion, for the mean time, good bye folks, I'm quite busy this past few days and will also be on the succeeding days wish me luck:P

44 comments:

  1. Huh? I thought the story ended already...the last part with the two guys kissing or something?

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  2. hmn...actually the story is getting more exciting ;) and it's making my mind "twisted" lol :P

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  3. anong boring? mas exciting nga! continue writing!

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  4. I like the middle part where they fell down and stared at each other. Good luck whatever endeavour you will be threading this week.

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  5. Its getting interesting, I somewhat hope that
    Anna and Christian end up lovers really :c
    Xx

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  6. part 9 na pala to? Kailangan ko nang magbackread ng previous chapters!

    Goodluck MEcoy sa mga pagkakabusy-han mo!

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  7. I like 'Ichan'... tawag sa akin 'yan ng ibang friends...hihihihi.... kakamis ang sequel na ito...biro mo, pang-9 na pala...

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  8. hmmm, getting more and more twisted huh
    anna and christian
    anna and trish
    christian and troy
    troy and trish?? :p

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  9. but you are concluding it in the next part??
    i thought there are still lots of possibilities

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  10. could be more twisted i can see
    but maybe you are busy
    that's why you try to conclude it ASAP??

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  11. hmmm, i am really excited to see
    what are troy and trish gonna tell christian and anna

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  12. i guess the conclusion in next part
    will be surrounding that "strange feeling"
    between christian and anna..

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  13. have a great day and happy blogging melvin
    take the best of care and god bless you always

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  14. It's not easy to create interesting story but you did it! Congrats! Have a nice day!

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  15. Seryoso, wala talagang nangyari sa kanilang dalawa nung time na they were both tipsy na and doing crazy stuffs lol... really eh? hahaha *evil grin*

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  16. You are so imaginative and make a good story teller!

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  17. Here we need talented people like you to write scripts for drama shows on TV.

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  18. These characters Troy, Trish, Christian and Anna are so similar to a current Korean drama over KBS channel now. They have Soo Bin, Myung Han, Jin Joo and Seo Ji Hwan. Madness love triangles.

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  19. tsk. napag iwanan na ako mecs!!! Naku naku! Kailangang balikan ang mga nauna.

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  20. i thought di na masusundan tong twisted. :)

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  21. napadaan saglit. musta na mecoy?!

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  22. Good luck sa kung ano mang pagkaka busy-han mo MEcoy! Siguro ang bonggang ending ng Twisted ang paghahandaan mo no? hehe :)

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  23. you know you are very bad or not? Argh....next part is the ending? Now making me frus wondering how it all end

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  24. let me guess...you are gng to make it a sad ending is it? Gonna kill off one of the character?

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  25. write faster ya....meantime have a nice day

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  26. hey Mecoy, you are very good in writing stories!! Talented....

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  27. i need to read the 8 stories before this post to get what the whole stories about :p

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  29. Getting more and more twisted!

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  30. So next part is the conclusion?

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  31. So busy? OK, will wait for the next part then. Happy blogging! : )

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  32. beep beep...nearly one week no post...?

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  33. ah sila ang nagmeet, magkasundo na? teka siguro na-miss ko yung part 8...back read nga ako :)

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  34. I agree with Ms. Balut Mecoy! The story is getting more exciting...
    Sulat lang ng sulat para masaya!!! ^◡^

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  35. I agree with Ms. Balut Mecoy, this is getting exciting! Sulat lang ng sulat para masaya! ^◡^

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