Sunday, March 3, 2013

Twisted (part 1)



It's the first week on June, and despite of the rainy days the school year has just begun. A lot of freshmen were on their first day, on a new school, and one of them is Christian. Christian is a handsome looking guy and with his height and nicely built body he sure is a boy next door type of guy. However he wasn't the guy, girls thought he is because deep inside him lies a woman's heart, yes Christian is a gay but due to a miserable event happened on the past he intend to keep it hidden.

Another student is on her first day of college life, her name is Anna. Anna was a certified head turner, with her flawless white skin, dark straight hair and angelic face nobody could resist her charm but ironically she is a lesbian and just like Christian she's discreet about it.

Christian and Anna weren't a stranger to one another, in fact the grew up on a same neighborhood, however, their families wasn't in good terms, and so are they. To their surprise they enrolled on the same college for the same course at St. Jude Thaddeus university and of course both of them weren't happy about it. They both knew each other's secret and having the thought of being on the same school and probably on the same class thrills them coz one might blow the cover of the other. Their college life has just started, could it be great? or perhaps a disaster.

72 comments:

  1. Wow I can't wait to read more...
    Mukhang may romance bang mabubuo sa kanilang dalawa..
    I am looking forward to more antic conversation between this two characters...
    Woot Woot...
    Thank you for the support on my PINK LIPSTICK story <3

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  2. Interesting story! Well written c:
    xx

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  3. bigyan sana ng twist ang ending, may mamamatay ba sa kanilang dalawa? hahahaha (sadista lang)

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  4. Hahaha.
    Josme, si Christian.
    May kilala akong Christian.
    HAHAHA.

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  5. Wow. Meron na naman ako aabangan;)

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  6. Nanibago ako sa bagong template, malinis siyang tignan. Drawing mo ba yan, eh mister, magaling ka pala sa lahat ng bagay. Siya kaabang abang naman nito.

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  7. Ikli naman.. Kakabitin. Anyways I know you're still on the process of making the story. Looking forward to the upcoming stories.

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  8. First, Congratulations for being on the 8th spot of the BNP 2013!

    And this new story "twisted" is worth reading! Interesting and intriguing! Can't wait to read more!!!! Sana mabilis ang update hehehe

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    1. Demanding lang super Mario? hahah!

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  9. opposites do attract... :) nice i want them to be together... shipping lang.. hahaha

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  10. wow! ito pa lang nagustuhan ko na.... saka like ko ang pagkaka english mo hehehe parang ang gaan basahin....

    kaabang abang.... ^^ more more pa!

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  11. good start
    waiting for 2nd part

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  12. ilabas na yan!!...come out of the shell....dapaat di tinatago ang pagiging lesbian and gay....mahirap kaya un...:)


    xx!

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  13. hindi ako maka relate sa story at mga tauhan... Christian yung name ng lead tapos gay? hindi ako maka-relate! bwahaha... nakakadiri pag nagkatuluyan sila ha... bwahaha

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  14. Haha. Mukhang maganda etong story mo parecoy. Kaabang-abang :) Love story to no hihi

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  15. Twisted nga!

    Andaming ganyan, girls na head turner. As in! tapos nakakapanghinayang. Hahahah!

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    1. Nanghihinayang Pao Kun? Hahaha #gumaganti

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  16. Love the artwork and the story is somewhat intriguing... part 2 pls!

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  17. excited for this... and since were in the same house... would you mind sharing the manuscript bro? hehe

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  18. certified stiryteller ka na. you could compile this and the remaining partsss into a novel.

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  19. Gosh!!! Looks like they're destined for each other? A gay and a lesbian, no?

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  20. wow, starting your novel posts again?? this should be interesting as both the characters are so unique..

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    1. so we may expect some rather special arrangement for Christian and Anna right?? or you have not have any idea now, but rather see the response from your readers before you decide?? hehe..

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    2. interesting.. and i would expect some unexpected for the subsequent parts.. hmmm, does this put you on pressure already?? hahaha.. keep it up and looking forward to Part 2..

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  21. happy blogging and have a great week ahead!! :)

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  22. Galing naman. Interesting ang story between a gay and lesbian.

    Looking forward on the next chapter!

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  23. bigla kong natuldukan sa isip ko ang kwentong ito....magiging sila ba in the future?

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  24. Mecoy pwede bang happy ending? Sayang kasi sila. Hehehe

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  25. Replies
    1. I wonder what will happen next ..will they go on pretending or come out of the closet

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    2. faster post up part two please

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  26. woot woot atta boy!
    can't wait for the story to unfold...

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  27. OMg i cannot wait to read the next part! What happens to them!!

    -liv
    http://chocolivlovelaugh.blogspot.kr

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  28. nabasa ko ilang comments mula sa kanila... may part 2 nga ba? anyway, interesting pair! pwede silang maging good friends...

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    1. ah, part 1 pala to.... di ko nabasa yung nasa title... mukhang interesting ang part 2

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  29. Looking forward for the part two:) by the way have you read the Vince's Life.. you should read it i guess this is your cup of tea stories:)

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  30. bitin, pero interesting ang storya. kelan ang part two? :)

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  32. hrmmm, romance story? hahaha, the picture reminds me of Running Man . . . silly me lol

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  33. Disaster yan bro. Hehehe. Yan ang gusto kong mangyari. Gussto ko makakita ng disaster. :-)

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  34. Mukhang maganda.. I'll be reading the whole plote of the story dude

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  35. Wow! Nice story! And it's just the beginning! I want to read what happens next! : )

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  36. Will we get to see more characters in part 2? maybe some weird characters? LOL!

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  37. I like story which are surprising and entertaining. Part 2 quick!! : D

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  38. that's a lovely story..love it!

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  39. I dont think it woulld be a problem, college is different from high school people here are nore exposed to the gay community. I mean mas oipen minded na siguro sila.

    Hehe

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  40. all the best to your new college life startup ! XD

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  44. woot love that story mecoy!!! mas nakakatawa ang ganyan kasi syempre diba nga may tinatago sila at pwedi silang mag-asaran magtrip and why not pwedi din naman silang mag end up together hahaha may ending kagad lol

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  45. wow! haha! LOVE the storyline!!! susubaybayan ko to! promise! haha

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  46. Nakakabitin naman yung kwento! tsk!
    Sana sila rin ang magkatuluyan! ^◡^

    Fashionmoto

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  48. mukang maraming twist and turns ang mangyayari sa susunod na kabanata . Kaabang-abang to pare koy :p

    Ang cute ng concept.

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