Sunday, March 3, 2013

Twisted (part 1)



It's the first week on June, and despite of the rainy days the school year has just begun. A lot of freshmen were on their first day, on a new school, and one of them is Christian. Christian is a handsome looking guy and with his height and nicely built body he sure is a boy next door type of guy. However he wasn't the guy, girls thought he is because deep inside him lies a woman's heart, yes Christian is a gay but due to a miserable event happened on the past he intend to keep it hidden.

 Another student is on her first day of college life, her name is Anna. Anna was a certified head turner, with her flawless white skin, dark straight hair and angelic face nobody could resist her charm but ironically she is a lesbian and just like Christian she's discreet about it.

 Christian and Anna weren't a stranger to one another, in fact the grew up on a same neighborhood, however, their families wasn't in good terms, and so are they. To their surprise they enrolled on the same college for the same course at St. Jude Thaddeus university and of course both of them weren't happy about it. They both knew each other's secret and having the thought of being on the same school and probably on the same class thrills them coz one might blow the cover of the other. Their college life has just started, could it be great? or perhaps a disaster.

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  1. GenskieMarch 3, 2013 at 8:27 PM

    Wow I can't wait to read more...
    Mukhang may romance bang mabubuo sa kanilang dalawa..
    I am looking forward to more antic conversation between this two characters...
    Woot Woot...
    Thank you for the support on my PINK LIPSTICK story <3

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  2. ice pandoraMarch 3, 2013 at 8:29 PM

    Interesting story! Well written c:
    xx

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  3. ZionMarch 3, 2013 at 8:32 PM

    bigyan sana ng twist ang ending, may mamamatay ba sa kanilang dalawa? hahahaha (sadista lang)

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  4. JAMarch 3, 2013 at 8:51 PM

    Hahaha.
    Josme, si Christian.
    May kilala akong Christian.
    HAHAHA.

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  5. joyMarch 3, 2013 at 9:16 PM

    Wow. Meron na naman ako aabangan;)

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  6. jonathanMarch 3, 2013 at 11:10 PM

    Nanibago ako sa bagong template, malinis siyang tignan. Drawing mo ba yan, eh mister, magaling ka pala sa lahat ng bagay. Siya kaabang abang naman nito.

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  7. June | Life and SpicesMarch 3, 2013 at 11:30 PM

    Ikli naman.. Kakabitin. Anyways I know you're still on the process of making the story. Looking forward to the upcoming stories.

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  8. Mar VerdanMarch 3, 2013 at 11:58 PM

    First, Congratulations for being on the 8th spot of the BNP 2013!

    And this new story "twisted" is worth reading! Interesting and intriguing! Can't wait to read more!!!! Sana mabilis ang update hehehe

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  9. AnonymousMarch 4, 2013 at 1:09 AM

    opposites do attract... :) nice i want them to be together... shipping lang.. hahaha

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  10. AdamMarch 4, 2013 at 1:33 AM

    interesting concept

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  11. JondmurMarch 4, 2013 at 2:30 AM

    wow! ito pa lang nagustuhan ko na.... saka like ko ang pagkaka english mo hehehe parang ang gaan basahin....

    kaabang abang.... ^^ more more pa!

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  12. AnonymousMarch 4, 2013 at 5:49 AM

    teaser!!!! :D

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  13. smMarch 4, 2013 at 6:26 AM

    good start
    waiting for 2nd part

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  14. xoxo_grahMarch 4, 2013 at 6:29 AM

    ilabas na yan!!...come out of the shell....dapaat di tinatago ang pagiging lesbian and gay....mahirap kaya un...:)


    xx!

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  15. Senyor IskwaterMarch 4, 2013 at 7:11 AM

    hindi ako maka relate sa story at mga tauhan... Christian yung name ng lead tapos gay? hindi ako maka-relate! bwahaha... nakakadiri pag nagkatuluyan sila ha... bwahaha

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  16. Archieviner VersionXMarch 4, 2013 at 7:26 AM

    Haha. Mukhang maganda etong story mo parecoy. Kaabang-abang :) Love story to no hihi

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  17. Pao KunMarch 4, 2013 at 7:34 AM

    Twisted nga!

    Andaming ganyan, girls na head turner. As in! tapos nakakapanghinayang. Hahahah!

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  18. GracieMarch 4, 2013 at 8:10 AM

    Love the artwork and the story is somewhat intriguing... part 2 pls!

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  19. bluedreamer27March 4, 2013 at 8:50 AM

    excited for this... and since were in the same house... would you mind sharing the manuscript bro? hehe

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  20. OlivrMarch 4, 2013 at 10:26 AM

    certified stiryteller ka na. you could compile this and the remaining partsss into a novel.

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  21. suituapuiMarch 4, 2013 at 11:34 AM

    Gosh!!! Looks like they're destined for each other? A gay and a lesbian, no?

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  22. [SK]March 4, 2013 at 12:02 PM

    wow, starting your novel posts again?? this should be interesting as both the characters are so unique..

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    1. [SK]March 4, 2013 at 12:06 PM

      so we may expect some rather special arrangement for Christian and Anna right?? or you have not have any idea now, but rather see the response from your readers before you decide?? hehe..

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    2. [SK]March 4, 2013 at 12:18 PM

      interesting.. and i would expect some unexpected for the subsequent parts.. hmmm, does this put you on pressure already?? hahaha.. keep it up and looking forward to Part 2..

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  23. [SK]March 4, 2013 at 12:19 PM

    happy blogging and have a great week ahead!! :)

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  24. fiel-kunMarch 4, 2013 at 5:44 PM

    Galing naman. Interesting ang story between a gay and lesbian.

    Looking forward on the next chapter!

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  25. Albert Einstein☺March 4, 2013 at 6:17 PM

    astig!

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  26. eMPiMarch 4, 2013 at 6:19 PM

    bigla kong natuldukan sa isip ko ang kwentong ito....magiging sila ba in the future?

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  27. PhioxeeMarch 4, 2013 at 6:56 PM

    Mecoy pwede bang happy ending? Sayang kasi sila. Hehehe

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  28. Small KucingMarch 4, 2013 at 7:18 PM

    this story have potential.

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    1. Small KucingMarch 4, 2013 at 7:18 PM

      cant wait for part two

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    2. Small KucingMarch 4, 2013 at 7:22 PM

      I wonder what will happen next ..will they go on pretending or come out of the closet

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    3. Small KucingMarch 4, 2013 at 7:30 PM

      faster post up part two please

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    4. Small KucingMarch 4, 2013 at 7:30 PM

      meantime have a nice day :)

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  29. BalutMarch 4, 2013 at 8:33 PM

    woot woot atta boy!
    can't wait for the story to unfold...

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  30. livlovelaughMarch 4, 2013 at 8:54 PM

    OMg i cannot wait to read the next part! What happens to them!!

    -liv
    http://chocolivlovelaugh.blogspot.kr

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  31. RicMarch 4, 2013 at 9:00 PM

    nabasa ko ilang comments mula sa kanila... may part 2 nga ba? anyway, interesting pair! pwede silang maging good friends...

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    1. RicMarch 4, 2013 at 9:01 PM

      ah, part 1 pala to.... di ko nabasa yung nasa title... mukhang interesting ang part 2

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  32. PANMALOFELMarch 4, 2013 at 11:30 PM

    nice

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  33. SunnyToastMarch 5, 2013 at 5:54 AM

    Looking forward for the part two:) by the way have you read the Vince's Life.. you should read it i guess this is your cup of tea stories:)

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  34. AnonymousMarch 5, 2013 at 11:30 AM

    bitin, pero interesting ang storya. kelan ang part two? :)

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  36. Koh Kian FaiMarch 5, 2013 at 11:32 PM

    hrmmm, romance story? hahaha, the picture reminds me of Running Man . . . silly me lol

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  37. Ishmael F. AhabMarch 5, 2013 at 11:36 PM

    Disaster yan bro. Hehehe. Yan ang gusto kong mangyari. Gussto ko makakita ng disaster. :-)

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  38. PANMALOFELMarch 5, 2013 at 11:41 PM

    nice picture :D

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  39. Jei SonMarch 6, 2013 at 12:21 AM

    Mukhang maganda.. I'll be reading the whole plote of the story dude

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  40. foongpcMarch 6, 2013 at 1:17 AM

    Wow! Nice story! And it's just the beginning! I want to read what happens next! : )

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  41. foongpcMarch 6, 2013 at 1:19 AM

    Will we get to see more characters in part 2? maybe some weird characters? LOL!

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  42. foongpcMarch 6, 2013 at 1:19 AM

    I like story which are surprising and entertaining. Part 2 quick!! : D

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  43. PANMALOFELMarch 6, 2013 at 10:32 PM

    nice

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  44. wennMarch 7, 2013 at 1:01 AM

    that's a lovely story..love it!

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  45. Mac CallisterMarch 7, 2013 at 4:10 AM

    I dont think it woulld be a problem, college is different from high school people here are nore exposed to the gay community. I mean mas oipen minded na siguro sila.

    Hehe

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  46. Happy walkerMarch 7, 2013 at 9:05 PM

    all the best to your new college life startup ! XD

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  47. AnonymousMarch 8, 2013 at 5:53 AM

    I usually do not leave many remarks, but i did some searching
    and wound up here "Twisted (part 1)". And I actually do have a few questions
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  48. Small KucingMarch 8, 2013 at 11:07 AM

    where is part 2......*waiting*

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  49. FiShMarch 8, 2013 at 8:24 PM

    i guess that is the law of attraction taking place? :)

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  51. PANMALOFELMarch 9, 2013 at 6:22 PM

    ;)

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  52. Anna and KlaudiaMarch 10, 2013 at 2:58 AM

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  53. LalahMarch 10, 2013 at 6:34 PM

    woot love that story mecoy!!! mas nakakatawa ang ganyan kasi syempre diba nga may tinatago sila at pwedi silang mag-asaran magtrip and why not pwedi din naman silang mag end up together hahaha may ending kagad lol

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  54. aianMarch 11, 2013 at 12:20 AM

    wow! haha! LOVE the storyline!!! susubaybayan ko to! promise! haha

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  55. Vett VandiverMarch 11, 2013 at 3:31 AM

    interesting story!!! nice illustration :)

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  56. PANMALOFELMarch 11, 2013 at 11:00 PM

    :>

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  57. PANMALOFELMarch 12, 2013 at 10:28 PM

    great pic

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  58. bagotilyoMarch 13, 2013 at 9:03 PM

    mukang maraming twist and turns ang mangyayari sa susunod na kabanata . Kaabang-abang to pare koy :p

    Ang cute ng concept.

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