Title: BLOG SHIFT
Objectives: To explore all genres or categories of blogging.
As you know my blog offers random topic which makes it more like a personal blog but then I wonder what of I shift into other blog categories, that's when I came up with this idea and I hope you guys like it:).
Notes and Tulips
written by Melvin "Mecoy" Coyne
It was the typical December, Monday morning, the sunlight was flashing from the window and the wind was whispering with a cold chilling breeze. Bobby woke up and groped to the other side of the bed reaching for his wife Maya, but she's not there. Bobby rose from bed to check for his wife, he went straight to the kitchen to see if she's there, but he saw a sticky note on the coffee rack which was on the center table instead and from there he knew his wife is gone. He read the note and smile "Not too much sugar dear, just two teaspoon alright? be honest :) and ohh grab a snack on the fridge too". After having his breakfast he took a bath then after he glimpse at the mirror on the small shelf above the sink and opened it and saw another note behind the shelf's door "Shave!" which he follows after brushing his teeth. On his closet and saw another note "Please don't mess up your closet dear, socks on the left undies on the right okay babe :p love you : p" His wife was a bit fussy about it.
He picked up his brown briefcase and his keys on the key hanger behind the door and there he saw another note saying, "Don't forget to lock the doors" after doing it so, he went to the garage and press the car clicker *beep beep* .On his car he flipped the visor mirror to look at himself as he always does and there he saw another note "Drive safely" at first he thought his wife was over doing it but then he smiled and say to himself that his wife just knew him so well. He drove all the way to his office.
Bobby was a lawyer on average law firm where he worked for almost four years now.On his desk he,
opened his journal and check for his schedule for that particular date, the note he wrote was overwritten with the word " Cancelled" and on the bottom of the page another words was written by a familiar hand writing "Don't you dare forget this day babe, I know you're forgetful but there's no excuse for this one huh?". Good thing his wife wrote it because he almost forgot, he stared at the picture of Maya on his desk for a while and smile "you okay, dude?" his boss, Mr. Henry said while placing a folder on his desk, "Yes sir" Bobby replied.
He went out of the work early and drove straight to the flower shop and bought a beautiful bouquet of tulips "Maya will surely love that Bobby, that's her favorite that always has been " Mrs. Robinson, the old florists told Bobby "Thanks Mrs. Robinson she sure will" .
He drive again for another 30 minutes and reached his destination he went out of the car and walk through a field of green and well trimmed grass towards a rectangular white marble, a grave stone. Bobby place the bouquet on one side and seat at the other "Happy anniversary babes, I love you thanks for always taking care of me, it had been almost two years and I still miss you on every second of the day" Tears were running down his face while he place his head between his arms that rest on his knees.
Cancer took Maya, and Bobby witnessed how she fought such illness tough they knew it was too late. Maya put all the sticky notes all over the house so she could somehow still take care of Bobby even she's gone. Maya told Bobby never to remove all those notes, not until he found somebody that will do it instead of her.
And up to now Bobby can't move on he can't bare to look at other women cause he knew Maya will be hurt for it.
The End :3
Though I'm not good at this, I had fun writing this story but It took me two hours to finish this which wasn't ideal for my schedule and I don't have a perfect grammar too so I guess Literature blog isn't my type lol.
Stay tuned for the next part of this series and wait for the next category I'll be featuring.
That all for now have a great week end every one:)
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hi mecoy thank you sa mga comment mo :) well goodluck for ur writing career.. i followed you..
ReplyDeleteWow...shifting blog ya :)
ReplyDeletesuch sad story.....sobs....
DeleteNah..Maya will not be hurt for it as she could no longer take care of Bob...so manybe she will be able to move on to another realm when Bob found someone who can take care of him
DeleteLooking forward to your next post
Deletemeantime have a great weekend
DeleteAaaw! MEcoy I am so happy for for this BLOG SHIFT! I love it. Just continue doing it and you'll have perfection as you go along.
ReplyDeleteThe story is very touching. I am excited for the next one so hurry up! :P New template again ha ha I love it plus the holiday mood! Nice one kiddo!
Wow! I like the story... nakaka inspire... pinapakita kasi ung pagmamahal... bilib ako kay Maya sa ginawa niya...
ReplyDeleteTuloy tuloy lang ^_^ ganda ^^
Oh nice to hear you're venturing into the world of literature. Are you going to maintain another blog featuring this kind of writing? This is a wise move Mecoy. It's another way to enrich your writing skills and as well as open you to the myriad genre of writing world. And by the way, I have my other two blogs too. Prose and Poetry and the other is all about being a daddy. It's not done yet as I'm still finishing some technicalities. But soon, I will introduce it to all of you too. Nice but sad story by the way. Keep writing dude! And I'll keep reading. God bless you always.
ReplyDeleteThis is really good story parekoy. Sad but full of love. Maya did not leave Bobby kahit namatay na eto. That's true love :) Keep posting parekoy :D
ReplyDeleteSweet! Nakakatouch. I mean, super!
ReplyDeleteSuggestion ko po: (Not sure kung yung "Notes and Tulips" yung sinasabi mong abangan ang next series) Kunga yan nga, sana wag mo na tong gawing series. Sobrang ganda na kasi na kayang magstand alone yung story. :)
Pero if you mean na yung "Lit blog" mo yung gagawan mo ng series (another category as said) then, KEEP ME POSTED! :) Will be waiting po. ^^
touchy end
ReplyDeletewaiting for next part
R u kidding? That was great! Made me smile deep within ya know :))
ReplyDeleteOh my god. That is just one of the sweetest and most heartbreaking stories I have read! I was near on getting teary when I have read the last part. Aigoo. <////3 Write more. c:
ReplyDeleteSad story... Keep it up! You write very well...
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Wow! I never thought it would end that way...Ayos, may element of suspense sa ending... Keep it up!
ReplyDeletewow, so you are shifting to become a writer instead of a blogger now?? hehehe.. or there will be a day specially for this Literature Blog in a week?? don't tell me you are totally switching over to a Literature Blog..
ReplyDeletewell well well, i think it is not really necessary to limit what you write in your blog.. as long as it's all from your mind and heart, that is actually YOU..
Deleteanyway, you are actually a good writer huh.. i like the story, so touching and you actually have a good plot on it.. love all those sticky notes, they are still there after two years and he is seeing them repeatedly everyday.. as if maya is there to tell her all the things written on the notes..
Deleteso the story ends?? is there part 2 or maybe episode zero for this?? that's where you can write more about the love between them, haha.. well, just my thoughts but looking forward to the next story..
Deleteyou have a great weekend melvin.. happy blogging and happy bloghopping too!! :)
ReplyDeleteWow, evolving ang blog ni parecoy! this is kinda interesting, at yung story ang ganda nung twist kaya lang medyo sad ending pero it really exists na yung love di basta basta mawawala yan at mapapalitan. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteThat was a really, really nice story Mecoy! Na touch ako sa ending..keep it up! Looking forward to the rest of your stories :)
ReplyDeletenice, simple pero may touch of class. Medyo nasiksik lang ng konti kasi nawala yung spacing per paragraph. :D
ReplyDeleteoh the story is good! Haha. I am proud of you for taking the risks that the blogosphere has to offer
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Good one! And I guess your doing the right thing to try other blog format or contain so you will know what direction you really want for your blog. kahit ako di ko nga pa rin alam eh...hahahaha:)
ReplyDeleteYea, I mostly do my blog posts every weekends not beyond 10pm because my dad put this crazy "time-out" on our router and the connection just disappears at exactly 9.30 >.> it sucks i know.. anws, get well soon! don't tire yourself so much. water therapy is a must too! God bless
ReplyDeleteOh my Goodness!!! In the beginning I thought why she is so nagging, but then I understand everything... Its such a sad story.... It happens that death takes the closest people in our lives just for one second..... You are so talented and kind guy because your heart is so deep and sensitive!!! Looking forward your next stories!
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ReplyDeletethat was lovely~ =D
ReplyDeletelove the post! mahusay ang pagkakagawa
ReplyDeletehmm, nawala lang ako nagevolved na blog mo Mecoy. lupet talaga.
ReplyDeletegreat story -- thanks for sharing!! <3
ReplyDeleteWell written... I like how you set the mood in the story...
ReplyDeleteKeep it up.. I would love to read more like this from your again :)
hmmm I kinda . . . SORRY I AM LAZY TO READ THIS HAHAH :X
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